a romantic story

Let me love you

Let me love you is a love story between two romantic couples where the man does not have a definite career.  Initially, the man loved her very much and willing to do anything for her, even though he was only a lowly employee who does not have a real and bright future. So, he spends his time with her with full of happiness.

However, the happiness disappeared when the girl said that he would go to Paris and will never come back. The man asked sadly why she must go away and would never go back. There is only one answer, the girl think that their futures were too dim; she only wants to look for her carrier. So, she will determine her own destiny. Unfortunately, the man also agreed to all hardly. But, the man gave her 1000 pieces of papercranes as a gift to her.

Several years later, he got a good carrier and has own income. At the time he went to her girlfriend’s house. When, he was driving a car he saw that there was an old couple wore the umbrella. Secretly, he followed them, without they know the man saw that her girlfriend has died from gravestone. With all of these facts, the man was very sad and immediately asked them, are they the parents from his girlfriend and they said yes. With sad feelings, Why is it happened to her so quickly and without I know? They said that, honestly she did not go to Paris, but she did not want you know that she had a cancer diseases, she was stricken with can certain in her heart, she believed that she would make something in the day, but she did not want her illness to be his obstacle. Therefore, she had chosen to leave you.  She asked us to put your papercranes in a bottle above his tomb. If you come back here and did not see her again you can see the papercranes. The man was very sad and do not believe with these fact.

From the story above, we can take the conclusion that the sacrifice is not necessarily shown directly but we can make good without the knowledge. We are more concerned with another who more needs our help. In our lives, this story is very rarely happened, because Feeling selfish between the couple has always existed, and it has never been willing to give up.

My critic about the story:

            This story is very interesting to read because it has a value that is no teaching directly. It teaches us how the sacrifice is very important especially about special relation in our lives. However, in this story the author is not giving explained how the girl is died with her diseases. I think it is so simple. Not only have that, the author also not explained how the man could get a good carrier in his live. It seems like, the story has a magic suddenly the man get a carrier.